Never leaving
Until he comes back
She waits
Dreaming for her reality
To come true
Author notes
I chose the option to use only 15 words
I tried my best...jeje
Tell me what you think
Credit to Photobucket
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XI - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
♥Dream♥
Comments
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Nice write here. It's often hard to say much in just 15 words, but you captured a lot here. Congrats on the trophies for this.
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Come True
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing a young adult-still a child in my Mind and word: Physician but it feels like reference to chemistry- Strengths Not like E-Harmony
but more as in subjects- and for some reason seeing a Yo Yo ...like You have good eye-hand coordination also seeing a Hopscotch- mainly after reading~ Getting this:
Believe in Yourself, You have what it takes to Reach for the Stars
Trying Your Best as You mentioned in the AC is what I look for
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Dreaming for her reality
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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"Dreaming for her reality to come true!"
Brilliance!
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Aww.. she's waiting at the waters edge.. hoping and longing... a lot said in those few words!
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