Fearing death across seas -
Praying soul mate wont be buried -
Years of timeless crying tears -
Author notes
I tried to put the prompt and the Picture togather and
This is what all I could come up with... These contest are great.. and Challanging...
Your Friend in Poetry... JackReed3 ....
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold XI - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 15, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Crying Tears
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ Now after inhaling Your verse also Author's Comments~ I'm Happy You tried and that is all I ask of everyone...let the picture or lyrics line seep in...or like how You did- combine them and let it flow~
The first thought that came to me was: I understand
especially with reference to Praying soul mate won't be buried-
You know while reading~ I kept seeing word: hurt...
kept getting word: shell...it is like the body is a shell, there is Life but not the feeling of living Life to its fullest potential
I'm getting hesitation~ this fear of not going to far, and again that word: hurt- don't want to be hurt...(like been hurt enough) yet hearing phrase: You have more to offer than meets the eye
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Years of timeless crying tears
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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I really like your poem...jeje
Good Luck in the contest!
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