This world has been corrupted for too long
From the beatings and killing of animals
To the raping and killing of innocent kids
Walking down a dark alley at night, you feel agonizing fear
Stranger could walk up on you with a gun and steal your money or life
I just want to walk anywhere without feeling this terror
Parents unable to let their kids out in the front yard
Must keep a watch on them always, for fear of a kidnapping
Freedom now becoming limited, from mentally sick people
Thinking of everything wrong with the world, you become infuriated
Anger, sadness, pity, and the want to correct all wrong fills you
Your emotions building till they are almost out of control
Suddenly from above god shines down light to unlock your soul
It has been freed from its sleeping chambers
You have now become the Angel Of Destruction
God whispers in his ear "Your emotions have become your power"
"It will only last a short while and when your done you will die"
"I know you'd rather die to make the world a better place, than live in this hell"
The man says thank you and begins his emotional storm of destruction
Warning everyone that is mentally fucked that this will not stand
There will always be someone to stop them from doing what they are doing
The ground starts to dematerialize right before his feet
Dark wings sprout from his shoulder blades and begins to levitate
Wind spins and moves at very high speeds, the power of only one person
Using the power of hate to bring down buildings and bring darkness
The the power of sadness to get rid of all scum from the earth
Then pity the power to take all victims to a better place
Moments after completing his task he falls to the ground and slowly withers away
While withering he whispers softly, "That was so worth my life, I feel better now"
Sun comes back, everything goes back to normal, he's now buried under the street
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wow.... that was amazing, that painted a picture in my head, wow...
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This is a great imagination for being inspired there. Wow...The only thing I suggest is to keep it in English. Not the 'chat' so to speak. Ur to Your and wanna to want to, you know. A great poem nonetheless. Thanks for being inspired.
~Kystal Angel
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I read this the other day, but I got called away before I could comment and forgot to come back. You have very powerful words and great imagery. Great job
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O.o Wow nice imagery, I loved the way God made him the "Angel of Destruction". Not to be bossy or whatnot, but in "The the power of sadness to get rid of all scum from the earth", is it supposed to be two THEs? You can tell you put a lot of work and effort into this piece Nice write!
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wow, an original story like take on the prompt. i like it =)
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Very Interesting.
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