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Music of a Love

Soft notes sifting through the night
Swept from my violin by a peaceful draft
The songs I play, in my weary attempts
to bring you joy.
Every time you gaze at me, the music bellows forth
As if written by angels.
Every time we touch, the power of that music
Sends shivers down my spine.
And when we part
The aria of sorrow brings me to tears.

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Malekar,Prompt Shivering Sensuality

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  • Sanchara
    May 27, 2008

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    so sweet and lovely, increadibly deep for a fourteen-yearold. I'm proud to be your sister right now^