Exasperated dust
dissipating over the eras
along these mental fissures
Author notes
10 words
Picture Prompt
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this was really good.. short yet beautifully crafted.. thank you very much for sharing.. I really loved it! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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Oh, this is brilliant!!!! I just love it! Such a thought-provoking write…I read this and was instantly pummeled into a deep session of thought. It evoked a sense of how humankind doesn’t seem to learn from history and the past…how it seems that, though documented, all that we’ve done in the past has just dispersed into space and passed away without any trace of it left behind to reflect upon or learn from…That’s just what rose up in my mind from it. I love the language, of course, so well done…ugh, masterful!!!!! I, of course, especially adored your use of the word “dissipating” one of my favorite words…ugh, such a delightful word. Your writing is just brilliant, absolutely superb. Fantastic write!!!
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Good luck in my contest.
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Congrats on the gold! very well deserved!
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Thank you very much!
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pleasure is all mine!
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Some great vocabulary executed...I particularly love your use of the words 'eras' and 'fissures'.
Totally Gold-deserving...major kudos here!!
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Wonderful take dear..excellent imagery!
all the best!
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Thank you!
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So cleverly creative... x
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