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Moon

I know perhaps
This moon I gaze upon
Is the last
I shall ever see.

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  • Desire gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Moon
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ Now after inhaling Your words I felt this sadness
    For some reason I got the word: Depression
    but that could be taken in different context~ get this feeling of loss like an absent feeling~ also hearing words: sleep deprived and workaholic...workaholic could be reference to school also...so much one has to do Getting nudged to mention: Need time for You-
    Save sanity
    And for some reason hearing that song from Christina Aguilera: Beautiful~
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    This moon I gaze upon
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~