Time clock,
taking a walk
Into the waters.
Unknown future,
lies ahead.
We’ll be dead.
Author notes
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15 words
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Ticking Away
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ Now after inhaling Your words I was seeing the words:
A Clockwork Orange- with Malcolm MacDowell also this may sound strange but reference to grenade and tossed in the water and seeing fish float to top
and it appears to be from a movie-or something seen before I think from a slapstick comedy~
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...unknown future
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Perfect... I loved it... this... YOur friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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i got to get my watch fixed
goood stuff short and sweet and full of energy
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i like ur poem...its good...jeje
Good Luck in the contest! ♥♥♥♥
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