Flavored rays glisten down
upon these vain lives.
Revealing all that transposes
within the tainted soul.
Pulling at the maiden heartstrings
and luring her with lust and contempt.
But alas she is marooned
until her lover elegantly returns.
Where the wings of independence enveloping them while
they journey back to their celestial palace.
Author notes
20 minutes...
Prompt: Picture (artist unknown)
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie(overnight)... Prompt by Angelflower.
716 points, ended May 21, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems About Anything (PW welcome) by Intricate Wordsmith.
550 points, ended May 28, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving
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Good luck in my contest.
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this was a really beautiful piece! I really like your take here.. You did a wonderful job.. very sweet..
well done..Best of luck!
Angel
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beautifully rendered in the picture dear...all the best!
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thank you!
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So welcome!
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