Light me a path through this graveyard
With your love’s eternal kiss
And aphrodisiac embrace
Author notes
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15 words
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words Once More - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 24, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Sweet Intoxication
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ Now interestingly enough after inhaling Your words I was seeing
novels...specifically one which looks like a romance novel...the man has long dark brown hair-no shirt holding a sword to the side with a woman in what appears to be Victorian clothing...Gosh~ seeing what appears to be a charm bracelet and hearing word: anklet Also reference to a perfume bottle..which
looks Victorian...frosted glass with a cork top
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...aphrodisiac embrace
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Nice Poem..I like your style... . Your friend in Poetry.. JackReed3...
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Excellent
Powerful choice of 15 words. You did great with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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