Animated butterfly effects
perform in enquiring times.
I rummage through ripples for resolution
there’s only, complete loss of my mind.
Author notes
Prompt:
"A pebble in the water makes a ripple effect
Every action in this world will bear a consequence
If you wait around forever you will surely drown
I see what's going down." From "Face Down" by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
In a list
A contest entry
- It's a quickie! 10-20-20 by Cerulean Sunrise.
1000 points, ended May 19, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful take on that prompt. Kind of abstract and thought provoking. Truly a joy to read. My favorite line was "I rummage through ripples for resolution". brilliant!!
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thats what i was going for, glad you felt it
Thanks
Cin
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A most brilliant and abstract penning my dear, well done, and congrats on the bronze!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thnaks Dad
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Well deserving of a trophy.Intriguing and powerfully expressive!Great write!*rise*
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thanks you kindly
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Neat.
Does remind me of a movie that I enjoy. -
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Aw thanks...it is like my fav movie hehehe..when I saw the prompt I thought cool
Thanx for the bronze...You made ma day hehehe
Cin
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Sweet rhyme sis! I think I lost my mind too in that butterly effect!!
(PS. one of my fav movies!!!)
Fab write for the prompt.. love it
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hehe what's the bet they both go up at the same time eeekkk
Good luck sis!
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Hehehe its one fo my fav movies to, tis where the what i do have here comes from lol, loving it so much and the whole butterfly effect thing
yeah sort of rhymed but not tightly...but I still liked how it helped it read etc
the note oh some thing, msg me if u want a pic or sumthing...i saw it when i went to edit my entry in..im bad at refreshing when im writing lol
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well im glad they didnt both go up at the same time ..that was hard
i struggled and after I wrote it saw the note about a pic lol...heheh oh well
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You did brill!! I don't know what that note was about *scratches head* heh .. blonde!
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