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Watching Time Pass Me By...

Missing image



It leaves a faint trail
Reminding me of what was
and never shall be, again...


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  • Desire gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Watching Time Pass Me By...
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ Now interestingly enough after inhaling Your words I was seeing
    American Idol- hearing: David Cook
    also seeing a smoke ring which appears to be from a cigarette~ linger.
    Ok..wild as it may sound...also word: manure
    now it feels like a reference to horse manure for I am seeing a horse...but looks like a rodeo- cowboys etc
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    It leaves a faint trail
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 23, 2008
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    ooooh

    that gave me chills. nice work!


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Reminding me of what was and will never be once again!! Wonderful wording here my friend! ~Sie