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Please..OPEN!

Sitting alone again feeling afraid
Dark, empty room, with life set ablaze

I just want to leave, I just want to QUIT!
But it's impossible when your life is an Abyss

Please just open, relinquish me!
Enough of the fantasty.
I want reality!

Serving no purpose, just hearing your voice.
Leave me alone, I've had enough of this noise!

One chance left
And that's all I'll ever get
One chance left
I don't know if I should take it.

My mind is dark
It's so hard do see
Please just open
And relinquish me!


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  • CarCrashHumor
    May 23, 2008

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    I could definitely see this as lyrics, and I'd love to hear it as a song of release and secrets. nice job with this and thanks for entering(I've never been able to write lyrical-type poems..)