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And silently I fall

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He stops for me
along a breathless tide
taking my life ~
without spilling a drop

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  • Desire gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: And silently I fall
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ instantly felt this presence of a grandmotherly energy and seeing
    flowers in her hand...I'm hearing *poppies*
    it is this feeling of 'You always have me' no matter what~ like on Your side- and hearing the word: cappucino- seeing a coffee mug
    but it looks ivory...hearing: head on my pillow
    There is reference to a song also-
    tears on my pillow (I am hearing that play)
    which is from Grease~
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...a breathless tide
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~



  • jackreed3 gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Very Nice write... Your friend in Poetry..
    JackReed3...


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 19, 2008

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    wow.. umm thats all i can say right now... wow..... amazing you are.... i love reading yur words... thank you for sharing and good luck in this contest....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Just beautiful!! Oh my.. I love this! You do short poetry so exceptionally well!!

    Sigh...