Staccato notes, allegro rhythms
driving faster- faster still,
till there is no melody
no harmony,
only platonic dissonances
and misunderstood chords.
Pick up the pace
a quarter note equals one sixty
but that's okay, because this music-
it was written for you.
Every sixteenth note has you in mind,
driving you over the edge.
So move your body faster,
but you won't make the beat.
Don't even bother trying this next piece
(It was only written to drive you mad.)
Author notes
Eh, no capslock. >>'
Just a run by of the musical terms here-
Allegro- Faster
Staccato- Short, with space between notes
melody and harmony I'm sure you know.
dissonances- space between notes(scale wise)
A contest entry
- 11 Poem Titles To Use by Angel Full Of Hurt.
900 points, ended June 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be harsh, be specific.
Comments
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This should have won over mine. If it would have been written with the capslock on I'm sure it would have won at least silver ... I really like it.
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awesome piece
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