Oh she’s
c/a/n/d/y s.w.e.e.t
But boy,
She’ll
B-r-e-a-k
Your
♥
So d~r~i~n~k her
D
O
W
N
And get
R*e*a*d*y
To go out with a
B!A!N!G!
Author notes
La Tua Cantante
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty/more points as I get them by letters to no one.
1250 points, ended June 11, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Dirty Pretty Contest by SchizoChic.
425 points, ended September 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great job. I love it!!!!
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Another amazing write! =] I absolutely love the way you write dirty pretty. ^-^ Very powerful poem. awesome job.
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Short and powerful! I love it! XD
~HH
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Ur a little odd
It's great once you get to understanding it!
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oh wow. I liked this. Very great imagery with the way you formed the poem. I especially loved how you used the picture of the heart rather than the word heart or the "<3" heart. Very nice.
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Wow!! Inspiring!
Awesome job, I really liked this.
~Pandy
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Oh! I like the B!A!N!G! at the end. Most effective I think. You're so creatie with these. I'm jealous.
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