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"A Tree in the City."

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Tree of Beauty...
You accent the building well
Hiding it's oldness
Adding elegance
And artistic strokes...
You make the scene feel anew!
Your graceful branches
Reaching upward,
Make your eyes follow its form
Showing how Nature has beauty too.
So hug the tree...
Thanking it for its gift.
For trees have feelings too
And when loved,
They show even more Beauty!


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  • Andantino gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    This is a poem of address

    and is a pleasure to read.
    As with many fine poems in this contest, you have drawn attention to the aesthetic things that matter in life.
    There is a spontaneity to your writing.
    'So hug the tree...'.
    Thank you, Will the ler.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    This is lovely. OH those things we take for granted. A wonderful reminder that we should appreciate instead of ignore. ~Pamela


  • Sprite silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    Lovely sentiments. I happen to agree that plants need love too. They lend so much beauty to this world, they deserve something back. ~ Joyce


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Aww.. lovely! That tree is beautiful and you've describe just what a gift it is to have that kind of nature around us!


  • wildfiredreamer
    May 19, 2008

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    Very nice, I enjoyed reading this I could see the picture with out looking at the picture as you described it well

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