MIRROR WORLD:
There is Darkness in the Light
There is Comfort in the Sorrow
Not visible, but you can see it.
It's always there with you.
There are Beasts in your Dreams
There is Silence from the Voices
The quiet keeps you awake
Your breath surrounds you.
There is Madness in the Sanity
There is Pleasure in the Pain
Your mind can play tricks
But it is you who controls it.
There is Hate in the Love
There is Death in the Life
Not worth living for
Nothing ever is.
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Well, you take the virtues and maladies and personify them very nicely with capitalizing to illustrate signficance
Very good! I also love the image. Very effective here.
I'm not sure if the pronoun of 'you' is successfully strengthening the power this poem has. Perhaps if is 'implied' by just the use of the verbs. Anyway... just a thought.
Otherwise, it is unique and makes an impact.
: Thank you!
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