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Lips




Your lips I crave
                  My lips I serve
Your inner lust I create
                  With my tongue I thrust
Begging you to feed me
                  With every thrust
drops the sweet juice
                  your wet liquid quenching
my needs and urges
                make me your lip slave
then bend over before me
                and into you I slide my tongue
Making every muscle of your body rigid
                I will slide and thrust to make you cum
for my duty is to serve with my lips
              Make me your lip slave
And with every thrust feed me
            your wet liquid to quench my thirst

Author notes

just a fucking erotic poem for the sake of it.

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  • Ice Queen
    June 21, 2009
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    Very nice and good luck in my contest.


  • crazymomma
    July 26, 2008

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    Oh my, it is getting hot in here. This was incredibly descriptive and so steamy. I want you to be my "lip slave". Thanks for entering and good luck


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 27, 2008
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      wel Crazymomma

      well I am glad you liked this and want me to be your lip slave, lol newayz, thanks for the comment and the oportunity to enter, God bless, and have a great DAY/AFTERNOON


  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    I can appreciate the sentiment -

    but when I read erotica, I really like to see you step outside of the box - things such as this are written all the time in almost the same wording


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 16, 2008
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      thank you though

      I appreciate the honesty, i did my best and was tired so uuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmm I was trynna enter a new one, but was too tired to write lol, well Good luck with the contest. thanks for the oportunity


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    July 13, 2008

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    this was erotically delicious how did you manage to slip through my county of erotic and I don't know who you are oh my I am so enthralled by this I shall add this to my favorite list of poems I like to read by artist


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 14, 2008
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      Theredcatjazzoflove

      hey I do not know how I manage to slip through your county of erotic poems, but I sure do know that we found each others now, lol well hey thanks for the write and God bless.

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