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I don't even know..

Phone calls made,
Too many
Conversations held
None.

Ring ring ring,
Yet again sent to voicemail..
This lovely voice I hear,
It repeats these words, again and again.

I'm tired of it all,
It's your turn now.
I'm always here,
You want me?
Call.

Trying seems hopeless,
I fuck up, it's relentless!
This time though,
Clueless, yep no idea.

Was it my fault?
Or was it you?
Did you find love from another,
Or are you still my angel?

You have my heart.
It's yours to keep.
I don't want it back,
Just toss it, or don't.

I love you babe,
So make your choice.
I'm in the dark on this,
Until I hear your sweet-sweet voice.

Shed some light,
You're my sun
Without, it's night.
I'm waiting here, forever it seems...
Darkness..

Author notes

"Please babe, don't ever leave.."
"click..."

I know it died, but wow what timing...

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  • xrated-candy
    May 30, 2008
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    very heart feeling
    this was a little hard to read just casue i understand so much! its like you love someone and you try and put 100% in but its like your not getting back the same and though you love them with everything you have sometimes the only thing you can do is hang on and wait to see what they will do or if they will do anything good work!


  • endless-lover silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    ..babe
    i dont even know what to fucking say?
    the poem was amazing none the less
    but oh my gosh im sorry!!!!!!
    im so so sorry.
    your still my star and im still your angel
    and no one else has my heart but you!
    i swear when i said forever and ever i ment it!
    i love you babe im going to call soon as i get off here and my mom cheeks her e-mail i promise!
    till then i love you with everything i got!