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Late For Curfew

Out of four cars
stopped at the light
four are taxis

The perfect score!
one hundred per-
cent! twenty-five
times four four four.

A contest entry

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  • movedon
    May 19, 2008
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    Interesting..Random (or maybe its just me)

    Mylee


  • vampireprincess
    May 19, 2008

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    It's interesting.. It think that you should develop the idea a bit more because you leave the reader confused. I liked the very first line in your poem. I think that it was confusing but in a good way. Thank you for entering and good luck.