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As silly as it gets

I once met some lovely totty
I really thought she was a hotty
She asked me if I'd spank her botty
Bright red botty hotty totty

She said her name was little Dotty
I saw her nose was slightly spotty
She fancies me she must be potty
Lovely spotty potty Dotty

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For no reason other than it made me giggle a lot

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  • moonbumps silver member
    May 20

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    Made me giggle to-mad silly write which just spills over with glee and crazy abandonment!!!
    The trouble with a name like Hilly is..........
    xxx


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 20
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    Grotty!

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    May 19
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    I hope ...

    you don't drive on whatever you were on when you wrote this.


  • ennovy silver member
    May 19

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    F U N N Y sweet little poem

    That made me LOL after I read it...now am wondering what got into you? You sense of humor is just plain cute........Lovely background to boot!...novy


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 19

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    Hmm. well since i know it wasnt bubbles that brought this one on i feel a little better. Your A NUT!!


    Made me giggle to when you read it, this is priceless.

    Love you
    Passions


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 19

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    you most likely inhaled too many bath bubbles Very catchy little rhyme here, Jeff Love, Lane

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