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"Tempt Not A Desperate Man"

Love, a so easily tempted thing;
Love will make you do anything;

Like Romeo and Juliet who were unfortunately damned;
"Tempt not a desperate man";

And death became them quite young;
Both were foolish, cautious neither one;

Did The Bard feel this when he wrote such a masterpiece?
Can temptation's grip ever release?

Love, such a tragic flaw;
Will land you right into a detestable maw;

Think twice before you let temptation in;
Before you end up like Romeo and Juliet commiting a regreted sin;;

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    February 28

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    Omg! I love it!!! I love how you used the Bard instead of Shakespeare! And The rhyming was AMAZING! (:


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    this is astounding. very good

  • Electricrose
    May 19, 2008
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    this is so good

    i really like it.
    it flows and is powerful