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Resist



Pushing to move forward -yet plummet
Further, down, back – inward
Conscious of coils circulating
Entangling my emotion
Maddening my mind
Seizing sensations
Yet, for just a moment
                liberated
Visualization of victory
Swallowed by blindness
Notorious desolation
                climbing
Upward, inward, arctic- solidifying dreams
Driven by shadows, battling brilliance
I resist
                          exhaustedly

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  • smiley
    May 20, 2008

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    EXCELLENT

    I feel like this sometimes... thanks for sharing with the world of your thoughts and feelings.

    Yvonne