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she will never know

Its always been a joke for you, that guy that shouldnt care, but everytime i meet with you - i feel sparks in the air

You say it just wont happen, we play and flirt and fight, but when you look into my eyes, i'm thinking that we might

So bad to even think this, for all the fuss and fights, the playful kisses on the cheek and talks into the night

I know how much you trust me, you tell me every day, but the feelings simply cant be true, why wont they go away

Counting all the kisses - on messages and texts, and reading into one or three my mind surley purplexed

So I sit & write this piece now, that you will never see, and just like all my love for you - i'll hide it here with me

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Just a short piece about something i think everyone has experienced, the girl you can never have and the pitfalls and excitment of the chase.

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  • luv2dream gold member
    May 25

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    so Lovely..but sad too.. life is too short to hold it back.. too many words left unsaid for those we love


  • Lexie
    May 19

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    Breath Taking

    wow, this is a wonderful poem! you are very skilled at making things flow and rhyme perfectly. there is never one flaw in your poems. they are perfect! you should try to go further with them. loved it!
    xx

  • Aww, this poem is so sweet and I can completely relate.
    It's short and sweet, and straight to the point.
    I like your use of rhyming.
    Amazing job.
    I can't wait to take a look at more of your writing.