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Blind Carnage

I stand in the middle of the city,

Robbed of sight but still seeing.

Voices sound around me.

All is normal. 

All is calm.

 

The breeze shifts,

I feel my hair sweep across my face,

Brushing across my features.

 

A sound turns my head. 

Swords clash,

Blood splatters, 

Someone falls. 

 

Why is no one stopping it?

It's getting louder,

The carnage is coming.

 

"Run!" I scream.

No answer.

"It's coming! Run away!"

Yet again no answer.

 

A gun fires.

A child screams then falls silent.

Bellows of war arise.

The fight has begun.

 

"Stop it!" I yell, desperate.

Someone grabs me.

A swords runs me through.

All goes black. 

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the battle they cannot see

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