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One-Celled Animal

one-celled animal
swims fitfully in dried pond
no one knows it's there

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~~ Violet Blossom ~~

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  • thegoldenpath
    May 20, 2008
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    You just took such a different approach you had to get something. Good job


  • individuality gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    ah the lonely existence of life at times, the struggle for survival, a good poem which shows how nature works in wild ways