white dot
over far away fairway
an eagle
A contest entry
- EAGLE HIAKU by Swan song.
1000 points, ended May 31, 2008, 19 entries
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good imagery
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Oh, you are so clever... that play on words!
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lol...I expected something a little more fowel...but being your on the green...go for the birdie lol
you make me laugh...in a good way though
Mal
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hahahaha...double bogey for me. i have a huge handicap...this is awesome. totally not what i expected, but i'm glad this was what i found. made me smile.....FOUR!!
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Beautiful... I see birds...lol...
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very nice image.
four-plus out of five.
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