My dream girl, where you be
I always dream of thee
Your face bright glitters white
Brighter than the rays of sunlight
And it masks your face in sparks
And moonlight on your cheeks marks
What you be? Let me see
Is your hair in blonde glee?
In dreams I see but cant tell whats thee
Come to me my heart waits
Together to sail dreams straights
Beauty, come embrace me now
My heart for you does bow
For your fairness my pen spills ink
In dreams all night I want to sink
Deep so deep to wishing time to halt
My poetry only you will exalt
Dream girl where you be?
Why only in dreams I only see
Are you an angel with a harp so sweet?
How you inflict love in my deep beneath?
Who sends you to appear in my dream?
Taking me on loves endless stream
Dream girl, what ye be?
Just tell me I totally fond of thee
Is your name rosy or Mary?
Only you make me be merry
Whatever your name let it be
Just one day hint to me who you be
Why in dreams dream girl why?
In real life I sob wail and sigh
How come twins I have and wife
When I met you not yet in life
But I know for you let me see
That in my heart only will dwell thee
Only ye will light my heart so bright
Brighter than the springs fair sunlight
This piece I write and put under my head
Maybe when tonight when you come to my bed
Be nice to jump out of the dream
Give my poetry an eyes beam
This I write for you wherever you be
The only way to say I love thee
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Author notes
this is a dream that im continuously having for the last 4 yrs :S maybe twice a week i see this girl in my dreams she comes and writes poems to me and then i see her married with me and we have 3 children two twins caroline and maria-anna and a son David. but i don't know who she is her face is so bright that i can't tell of her identity all i know that she loves me and i love her. when i had a gf she was so upset she never appeared in my dream then she appeared on time crying later that week i broke up:S any dream tellers could help me with this
i love her sooooooo much without knowing who she is
i hope this entry is acceptible
thanks
A contest entry
- Drop what your doing and write what you are thinking by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended May 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just A Dreamer ~ Winklings and Friends: #88. by Lyndon.
6000 points, ended June 20, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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dis is da second poem i read 4 2day. and al da time i was read dis i was like awwwww wow !
than it pisses me of when i read dis gre8 poem and saw dat this hell of a guud poem didnt win anything. it was sooooo fuckin guud. if i was a judge i wud surely given ya a gold . butt sorry dat they faild to see dis rite
dis rox
- Remix Factory
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o and your applause
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whoa that is amazing!
4 yrs aye thats a long time
my fav lines are:
"How come twins I have and wife
When I met you not yet in life
But I know for you let me see
That in my heart only will dwell thee"
your such an amazing writer! -
Mr Romantic, uh?
Repetition is the main poetic device that really works for you, here. You do have passionate feelings and they help, too.
Thank you for partaking.
Lyndon of the Winklings.
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i just want to ask why would you wait? look for her hun you will find her soon n when she reads ur poems she'll know she's lucky heh
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your poem is really awesome i can't wait to read the whole collection
i think ur everything a poet should be i really love every single word you write. people get their inspiration from a different places i get mine from you
love your work
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you make me blush im an empty box i cant inspire anymore im a dull star i get my brighness from neighboring stars at least they make me be and look bright
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you make me blush im an empty box i cant inspire anymore im a dull star i get my brighness from neighboring stars at least they make me be and look bright
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This is so nice and so romantic. I loved your author notes as well.
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I have daydreams of a soulmate, but yours are so real it hurts. A beautiful sentiment to your faith in true love. I hope one day you see her face. You touched me.
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This was amzing I have a similar dream but about a boy wow amazing and well done hit me upon message!1!!!!1!!
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i like your dsplay pic a lot
and thanks so much for your comment i hpoe your dream comes trueee
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a very amazing situation your in, i enjoyed the poem but it seemed as if you were trying to rhyme a bit much, good job
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sometimes in our dreams we do see our future and I do so understand this poem so well...I have had repeated dreams my whole life and felt incomplete when they weren't fulfilled...best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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THis is beautiful, touching and sweet. I hope you find her soon. I know what this is like...except...I'm waiting for my dream guy. Lol.
God bless you.
Beautiful poem.
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a good poem, smiling with dreams, ah to find the one, the one that inspires us to dream of love and dance in the colours within the mind, all good
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she is lovely
perfect for you sweetie
amazing write
love ya!
oxxxoxoxoo
God bless...
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she's your perfect gurl!
you WILL meet her and have a lifetime of happiness with her. you can be sure of that!
great art bro
she'll be proud
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sis i so fond of her btw she came to me yesterday i love her so much for reasons i donno why
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