What This Feels Like
You say your life isnt perfect
Do you know what your saying?
Do you know mine is worse?
You say how can you say that?
But, I really can.
I love the way you say “I hate life”.
You need to stop,
Because you make me sick.
So sick I feel the need to throw up.
To make myself sick,
Is your only hope,
So I'll do it.
Then I'll put you out of your miserey,
And you'll know what this feels like.
Hmmmmm......
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i like this, and i understand the problem, lots of friends complain about their lives when i feel like mine is worse that theirs but there are other friends that def have it worse than me yet i complain about my life
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i lovee this poemm! :] its cute
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thanks, but morgan, this isnt supposed to be cute...
i hope you understand this poem, cuz i wrote from a time in my life....
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PERFECT
ok, so i totally want to say this to someone right now.... you took the words out of my mouth! awesome poem... keep up the great work.
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wow this is really good i lovr t hey u wrote it is like telling poeple
off lol
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I felt the passion in this...
My Dearest Anna,
I loved this poem because you are tellin' the people like it is!And I admire that about you, because we all know I sometimes beat around the bush lol.Well, I love this poem because it really means something to you!
"To make myself sick,
Is your only hope,
So I'll do it.
Then I'll put you out of your miserey,
And you'll know what this feels like"
this is my favorite part of this write..... three roses for your work
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