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[ i love, ]

i love,
and i hate.

i live,
then i die.

what is left in this lonely world,
but hate, sorrow, and death.

im still alive because of you,
and i died to save you.

you said you loved me,
and i said it back.

but you still seemed sad,
so i loved you more,
you smiled at me and said your the reason im still alive.

i held you in my arms,
and you never left.

we stayed together forever,
until...... death.

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    May 19, 2008
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    very nice poem, I like it, keep writing