Seduction drips liberally upon tender lips and thighs
like forbidden wild honey, she has become the sweetest
taste of fleshy sin.
My hands desperate for her silky Eden
these fingers explores her ebony frame continuously
revealing raw sensuality on every curve
sweat flows as ecstasy and fantasy
levitates our bodies,
in the evanescence tantric euphoria.
Allow me to surrendered liquefied kissed
too your chest, stomach, back, neck and thighs
I swell with anticipation,
wanting deeper satisfaction and release.
A contest entry
- Make Love With Out Using Your Privates (( No Kids Please)) by theredcatjazzoflove.
1100 points, ended May 19, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh very sensual! i like it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Congrats!!!
Love this line "My hands desperate for her silky Eden" very creative and I see why you won. I love this one and the thought in the title. Keep Writing!


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ohh yummy! no wonder u got gold hun
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh i love it!i just connected with this on a deep level artist this was like reading the male version of myself
you blew me away I love this it totally grabbed me this is how you entetain me thanks
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Ha ha ha... Now THIS is good.
I like the content, flow, and direction you went with this. Write on poet. One.
Dez

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