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Black Honey

Seduction drips liberally upon tender lips and thighs
like forbidden wild honey, she has become the sweetest
taste of fleshy sin.

My hands desperate for her silky Eden
these fingers explores her ebony frame continuously
revealing raw sensuality on every curve   

sweat flows as ecstasy and fantasy
levitates our bodies,
in the evanescence tantric euphoria. 

Allow me to surrendered liquefied kissed
too your chest, stomach, back, neck and thighs
I swell with anticipation,
wanting deeper satisfaction and release.

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  • GypsyEyes
    July 3, 2008

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    oh very sensual! i like it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • MahoganyFlow
    May 23, 2008

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    Congrats!!! Love this line "My hands desperate for her silky Eden" very creative and I see why you won. I love this one and the thought in the title. Keep Writing!


  • Lonely Christina
    May 20, 2008
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    ohh yummy! no wonder u got gold hun


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh i love it!i just connected with this on a deep level artist this was like reading the male version of myself you blew me away I love this it totally grabbed me this is how you entetain me thanks


  • secberm
    May 19, 2008

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    Ha ha ha... Now THIS is good. I like the content, flow, and direction you went with this. Write on poet. One.

    Dez

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