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Tree in the City

At the bottom of our garden
Stands a really big tree.
I can remember the time
when just you and me.
Planted the sapling
so tiny and small
At the back of the garden
where our babies would crawl.

With the branches hung down
we sit under our tree.
We'd talk about our future,
just you and me.
The tree is still growing
So tall and so strong.
Just like our love
this is where we belong.

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This is a true tale

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  • Andantino gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    I believe the memories are genuine.

    You wrote well and significantly. However, your poem gives no inkling of why it's a city tree.
    Will.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 23, 2008
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    ...and a beautifully romantic true tale at that. This made me smile. ~Pamela