A misunderstanding
A judging scene
Played from a movie
Some time alone
Criminal charges
Behind bars
Never knowing what love is
Isolated
Forgot
Never moving on
Days turn to months
Months fade to years
Sitting there starvation occurs
Arms limp and face hollow
Inmates afraid to look upon you
Officers come and take you out
You stare in the sky as if it’s the first time
It’s bright and beautiful and for the first time
You feel okay
Take first steps to the room
Where you were betrayed
Sitting on chairs are people
You once cared for
Still unsure of what to do
Voices walk to the back of you’re head
Solemnity lies on your aching face
As the judge proceeds
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nicely done...doesnt fully capture the fear and everything you feel in front of a judge..i know i was terrified my first time...but maybe thats what you werent trying to convey
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BEAUTIFUL
&
POWERFUL
i love this poem mymost favrotie lines are "Arms limp and face hollow
Inmates afraid to look upon you"[keep it up] :]
you ROCK
Brokenlovelyness
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welcome to allpoetry
You have some great lines here... thoughts flowing freely, with feeling. Thank you for sharing your talent here with us all. I hope you will continue to do so.
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i'm speechless i loved this the words you used how you used and the stanza you grabbed my attention loved it good job.
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Honey I really wish I could write like you!
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wow this is awesome. Finily u have some poems and there awesome lol. Keepup the good writes. -brook
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