I hate it when you say it
Stop saying i love you
It hurts me inside
Like I'm shattering
A piece of glass
Falling from a building
of unnameable heights
Being hurt so many times
is a deceitful crime
I hate it
I hate it so much
It makes me laugh in insanity
Just stop with the cares
Just stop the lust
Its pitiful
It insane
I don't wanna love
Cause its nothing
But a fools dreams
So no
I will not say it
any longer
to you
I will never say it again
Never again
So leave me hear in my insanity
Please I'm begging you
Don't fall for me
Cause i will only hurt you
For it is a forsaken wish
Of deception
You no nothing of love
You do but you don't
so stop
i know nothing neither
except for the darkness...
that consumes me
No kisses
No hugs
Its a fools dream
It over
No more
Just forget you ever had me
Erase me from your mind and heart I'm begging you
Erase me
I'm only a figment of your imaginations
Author notes
Just please let me be
I dont wanna ever hear or say these words again, Just let me be alone
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i can feel the raw emotion in your work and i admmire it.
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wow this is a great poem
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awsome emotion
cool that just makes you think and insaine with anger
okay wow um publish PUBLISH publish
you feel like this now but when you meet someone that really does mean it and will do anything and everything to prove it well they will well if they really do mean it then they will exclude somethings that are only meant for after marrage but you know what i bet if you just keep that good old faith pumped up you'll find that someone that will take the darkness pain and sadness away and will bring you joy and many wonders that will make you feel great not horrible
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im sorry if this poem hurts people, but it just what i feel, and its not about anyone, its just how i feel right know
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...Is this about me?
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this is so sad....i've been there before trust me!! but then i met someone whom i wanted them to change my perception on love....and im sure eventually you will too
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Awwwww, this is so sad, amazingly sad...!.! It has so much pain and emotion in it it hurt me physically to read it, and it is emotionally devastating...Very Very good!
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this is sad. love is filled with pain but it doesnt all have to hurt.. trust me. this was a good poem but dont ever make things go away...when you erase somebody or something it never comes back. it sucks and i dont want anyone to go through that. thank you for writing this sad beautiful peice
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i fear the same things
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hmm
you have a lot of mean feelings towards somebody! that isnt very good! i like the repetitiveness and the feeling in this peice, i think it made it, though it was kind of BAM, it made it very weel written. keep this kind of thing up hun!!
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I know exactly how you feel. Ah, I see that my boyfriend got here first. He is correct, to me it was as though love didn't truly exist, and I wanted no part of it. I was afraid. What hurt me most though wasn't him saying he loved me, it was when he called me beautiful. It was "like I'm shattering". I didn't know if he understood it or not, but aparently he did. Take care and if you need to talk, I'm here for you.
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Actually, I have a number of things to say about this
How ironic, that when I first met my girlfriend she believed almost the exact same thing. But in time she saw that though it was a rarity, true love actually does exist. I understand your point however. Many people say those words with such condiscending tones expecting something in return.
Now I know you don't want to hear this, but I'm going to say this anyway. You can confide in me. Unlike the others however, I don't expect anything in return. That's your choice much like everything else is.
"Leave me to my insanity." First of all, insanity is merely someone who dwells outside of the required mental boundaries of society. So when you can define to me the word insanity I will allow you to be alone and "insane."
Finally, I've lived the last 5 years of my life in depression. Destroying my own life and the lives of others. I wouldn't take it back for the world. It's people like us that weather our depressions and come out very intellegent, no not by societ's standards. I mean philosophically and sociolegically. -
wow
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