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Unassuming Love




Sweet meadows sway in lazy dreams
of summer
as whispering winds of affection
beckon hearts to flutter

basking upon the rich, warm earth
embracing under the sun,
our spirits flourished in freedom
of unison flight;
dancing like butterflies,
floating from bud to bud,
creating memories
made in sighs

though darker skies
brought rolling storms
of circumstance,
unearthing the very root of blooms
and showering sorrow in teardrops
upon open petals

our unassuming promises
held fast against the currents of change,
as our weaved heartbeats
sheltered our love
under a simple canopy

 

of truth~

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

To be able to truly love anyone, you must allow your heart to become humbled."

~Errant Panther

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  • PerfectImperfection
    August 6, 2008

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    Awww sis!! This is just beautiful.. A truly heart felt piece of wisdom to be embraced, for true love is a gentle wave, in which we must cherish with grace. Lovely imagery and flow here.

    "our spirits flourished in freedom
    of unison flight;
    dancing like butterflies,
    floating from bud to bud,
    creating memories
    made in sighs"

    .. oh I just adored these lines - so tranquil and serene ..

    "our unassuming promises
    held fast against the currents of change"

    .. such a strong thread woven of hearts, powerful ..

    A most lovely write indeed!!!


  • poppa
    August 5, 2008

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    beautiful write.... love where you have taken the prompt...congrats on your HM ..


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    beautiful


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Such a lovely gathering of beautiful words fluttering across a page to create such beauty!

    I love this...
    As soft and sweet and the pic...

    Lynda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 22, 2008

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    Oooh my but how beautiful this is!
    Just reading this warms the heart
    Wishing you the very best of luck in this contest, hon!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    May 21, 2008

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    Truyl Beautiful...xoxoxox Ken Good luck in the contest..Have a lovely day


  • kaibab silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    This is indeed a beautifl expression of love as shelter...so beautiful as always...a pleasure to read...good luck to you...and thanks for being a friend...

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