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Enraptured ...

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A sure grasp
and discriminate eye
wends honorable flight …


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Author notes

in the style of Native American thought ...

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31
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    excellent!!!!!!


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    May 22

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    Brilliant!!!

    Best of luck in this contest, Joy!!! Peace, Cyn


  • myriad-dark
    May 20

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    beautifully rendered...

    just like thoughts that take flight... nicely penned & presented Write On! 'd'(david)

  • Bad Bill
    May 20
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    An assured and confident haiku--very well done.

    Bill


  • leo2
    May 20

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    Eagles are such majestic birds. I see your travels have only embellished your appreciation of the beauty of nature. Best wishes in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Has anyone told you how beatifully talented you are today?

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