you say we dont understand...
does the blade understand you as it
rips through your arm and slides down
your leg or does he understand you as
he kisses you and holds you close...
or that he says he'll never hurt you.
but how long will that last and at
what cost his hand your life sex....
or maybe the drugs understand you as
they clinge to your bodies organs as a friend
would do to help you.you say we dont understand
you,because i know the dangers of the world...i've
been where you at and i know but i dont understand..
i musst not understand because you dont want me too
you must love it,love making me cry because i cant help you
or you dont want me too...you say i dont understand but
first you must realize who you are and what
you want....
A contest entry
- An outside view of youth by Suicide Hotline.
525 points, ended June 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tears fall on deaf eyes...
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Ah, confusing, and disturbed.
anyway nice write.
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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This is a good poem. Keep on writing.
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welcome to allpoetry
I like the idea of this... the way you expressed your thoughts. You have some good lines though I think it would have a better flow if you would break up the lines a bit. Read what you have written out loud and see/hear where the natural break should occur. Thank you for sharing your words here with us all. Keep writing on.
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Great poem, thatnks for the entery.
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Good. I hope you keep writing and get things out there. Thanks for sharing.
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