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the fish and us

worlds are running rampant
technology is tricky

when the underworld of fish come up on shores
made for and by machines
they will be sorry

for cold the world's become
in all its up-to-date-ness
i am one of many humans here
working to improve them
while killing myself off

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10 lines... pic prompt...

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    Wow, such an itriguing write you have penned here..
    I like how you thought of technology, and expressed your notions so deeply and originally. Great take on the prompt!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering