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Searching For A Remedy

Searching my heart for that remedy
A mission had in misery
I felt it break into pieces had
Now how could it happen and make me feel so bad
A crash, a bang, a sting, a fang
Never to wonder again what it felt like
To roll around and touch the sand

A phantom of love and disgrace
I search this world for love and grace
I will not wait another moment
To feel distruction and hear it break up
That distant fire of friendship
Was broken as we fell down
And beared the sins of fire and hell
Now I wonder what would have happened
Had we not rolled, rumbled and fell
To distant fights of memories
That car destroyed and so we fell
Into deaths grasp as the fire went
And brought us out again to live.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Wonderful work here! Thanks a lot
    for entering this contest. I appreciate
    your entry and wish you the best of luck
    with it here! Take care and keep up the
    great work here!




    Jeremy0826