Tears drain as he tries to remember
What he has forgotten
A half a world away his love dies
A sorrowful forgotten death
Author notes
meh....
Comments
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it was a interesting peice that tried to interpit a few ways, lovely!
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a thought?
the last line make it "a sorrowless unknown death"
i think it would bring otu the emotion more..just a thought
good either way! -
Unspoken words that begin to fade in time. As love slowly fades away. Very nice!! ~Sie
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