Craydoe tri craydoe tree craydoe eye craydoe Z
tri to see the craydoe tree tri to see the craydoe tri to lie in the fountian to lie in the see i dont know you craydoe tree tolate is the fountian tolate is the see but i dont find the fountian my tee Seven T tree do you care or do you see i ain't the fountian i ain't the tree tolie is the fountian to lie is the see to lie is the fountian to lie is the see tradian tri tradian tree i ain't you fountian i ain't your tree to land in a fountian to land i a tree to land in a fountian to land in a see could you see a mile high see or could you see a mighty Seven T tree to land in a fountian to land in a see to land in a fountian to land in a see tolate is the fountian to late is the see to land in a fountian to land in a see the trick of the story is to trick of the see to land in a fountian to land in a see dead is the fountian dead is the see tolate for the fountian tolate for the see tolate is the town then tolate is the see tolate is the mountian tolate is the tree tree end.
Author notes
To lin to lan to line to T i ain't the fountian i ain't the tree
A contest entry
- Tree in the City ~ biographical or descriptive # 86 Winklings and Friends by Lyndon.
5000 points, ended June 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Unique
Hi!
Will.
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Your style is unique and very interesting, but I feel that this would be so much easier to read and comprehend, if you at least put commas or periods in occasionally.
The poem appears to be about dissipation. Is that true?
Good luck in the contest.
Joyce
P.S.I see that you have put "to late" which I believe should be "too late." The title has to be "A Tree in the City."
P.S.S. You also need to use spell check.
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