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Nakedly Beautiful

In a saddened world
The beautiful fall
Deeper into despair
In this saddened world

So how hard is it for you
Where you need to go on
Living to kill yourself
So beautiful to me
The man behind the mask

Watching through narrowed eyes
Clouded thoughts of you
In my eyes I see the world
Reflected in your eyes
Reflected in my eyes
I am the man in the mask

Sheltered from the world
But I'm not sad
Taken away from all your pain
So beautiful you are
Come to me as you are now
Nakedly beautiful

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 10, 2008
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    a powerful write which discusses the horrid truth and facts of life and what and how our society has become as we have become so influenced with thing sin life such as celebritys and we make and enforce them as our role models but this leaves so many going ill and believing that they are too ugly to be alive. a powerful and emotive piuece well done