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Forgotten

 

 

 

 

Forgotten soul rises

 

memories of her horrid death

 

cloud her aching mind

 

abducted and raped

 

left dead in jasmine fields

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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20 Words
Prompt: Please Credit the Artist:
http://noawkwardsilences.deviantart.com/art/Broken-Dreams-62868318

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  • jasminerose
    May 19, 2008

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    Stunning piece of poetry you have penned here!!
    Congratulations on the award with this very emotional entry!!
    Linda


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Fantastic take on the prompt..knowing my mind I would have gone on a similar tact...


    Simon


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    May 19, 2008
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    wowo great take J
    best of luck

    TAsha


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 19, 2008

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    wow what a night mare.... great write... thanks for sharing.... good luck in contest....... have a great day...

  • Nighttime angel
    May 19, 2008

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    this is a very dark write.. I can see this all too well.
    such a sad and tragic event to occur.. I love your take on the prompt..

    good luck

    kat

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