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Predator

predator
circling the sky
swoops

A contest entry

Do you realize how complex haiku really is?

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 23, 2008
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    A moving haiku Well done


  • individuality gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    a good poem, the sky is owned by a feathered warrior, its eyes as sharp as it precision dive, hunger drives life on.