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Visions of Beauty.

Visions of beauty

Dance before me

In a diamond studded sky,

Watching them,

Watching me,

Breathless at this dazzling display.

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Prompt- Clue ~Set my dials to peer across the universe, I stand tall on my three legs.

Answer - Telescope.

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  • Melodies silver member
    July 11

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    A really smart poem that speaks well and casts out images of heavenly beauty. I love poems about the sky because no matter what, we all get to share the beautiful night sky.


  • Weltt silver member
    May 22

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    This had a softness about it that i really liked. very well put together and much enjoyed. thank you for entering