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Forever and a Day

On my knees,

I beg, I plead,

For one last chance,

For my soul to be freed,

Right here, right now,

Just you and me,

You see me babe,

On bended knee,

Who was I

To cause you pain?

Hear me now

As I explain,

I made mistakes,

I sank so low,

Baby I love you,

Please don't go!

Just say the word,

I'll change my ways,

I want to be with you,

For the rest of my days,

You know I hate,

To be alone,

I feel so bad,

That you're on your own,

Angel, trust me,

Hear me say,

I'll always love you,

Forever and a day.

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  • A lovely heartfelt piece thats significantly capturing through the lines of description, the storyline and the vocabulary especially affectionate terms like 'Angel'. Just a beautiful poem devoted to emotions felt when a loved one has the potential to leave, touching. Beautiful mum, great work created here, I'm surprised you didnt receive a reward because this honestly deserves it.

    ~Emily~ xx

  • What a moving poem...letting your lover know how much he was loved..especaily calling him "Angel."

  • I love it... It's very nice...