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~ Her Tears ~

Missing image

As she cries-

she weeps ...

her tears they pave the way for the day;-

for her dreams-to be realized.


~ Written For you By: ~ James Lee Long ~

Author notes

10/20/30 Contest

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http://noawkwardsilences.deviantart.com/art/Broken-Dreams-62868318

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  • kdom
    June 17
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    says so much with so few words...


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    Nice imagery here, realised in such a short poem.

  • stevenssk8tergirl
    May 21, 2008
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    alsome i like the way you put your time into i

  • Many Sparrows
    May 20, 2008
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    Real Life

    I can relate to this. Well said.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    her tears they pave the way for the day.

    so beautifully profound.

    God bless...


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Very nicely done...classy and very deep...

    Well done James...you really are a talented writer..

    Simon


  • Nevel
    May 19, 2008
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    Well done! I really like your last two lines Good luck in the contest

  • Nighttime angel
    May 19, 2008

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    I like your take on the prompt. particularly the last 2 line. these I can relate too. great job on this.

    good luck

    kat

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