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To live...

Wishing for peace
            within

No storm emerging
            out of nowhere

Not haunted by
            the past

She then will live
            Freely
               

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http://noawkwardsilences.deviantart.com/art/Broken-Dreams-62868318

10 Poets
20 words
30 minutes

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A contest entry

Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!

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  • Unsigned gold member
    May 19, 2008
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    Beautiful...I really love the peace and tranquility of this...

    ~Simon~

  • Nighttime angel
    May 19, 2008

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    ooohh I really love this one a lot. something that I can relate to so well. outstanding job on this and I love your take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    I like this poem it is true to speak I am going through this now in my life thanks for sharing much love always


  • everyone1 gold member
    May 19, 2008
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    Interesting...

    great take on the prompt ... best of wishes in the contest!

    ~ James ~