When Hollywood
And money keep
Tempting me too much,
And they end up
To be the wrong thing
That could tear
The soul out of me...
I want to live like
A killer whale,
Swimming through
The ocean
Happy and free.
I want to live like
A killer whale,
Among families and friends,
Swim to no end.
When my parents, my college lecturers
All pressure me to be someone
I don't want to be...
When the world is against me
And throwing stones at me...
I want to live
Like a killer whale,
Big, beautiful creature
Hunting among my fellow friends
Not caring about the world.
No bad comments, insults, destructive criticisms just tell me what does this poem makes u feel?
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love it
hey been awhile i love this poem i know what its like to want to be something else i have had so many preasures in life that i wish i cold up and fly away i wish i could tell you it would get better and lie as well as some adults but life gets hardder by the day and the only thing that makjes life worth liveing is if you choose the way you want to live live your life without regret for if you redret the life you live that it not life at all. that my favorite saying basically dont let anyone tell you how to live your life not your parent teacher or anyone you know as long as its your choice then maybe it will make you happy . i have had people telling me how i should live my life and for awhile i listened and let my mother and grandmother control the way my life would go but i regret eachday and became so depressed that i almost killed myself from there it was hard when i started on the path of making my own disitions and it was harder for the main thing that no one was telling me the choices to make i was very indicive at time but what made me happy is that in the end it was my choice lol well i like this write and i hope to here from you siiin i miss talking to you lol later
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great
loved it
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