As the darkness fluttered from my fingertips,
I write a swollen page of emotional grief.
It cloges my senses and makes me repeat,
only to see it stops my movement completly.
Frozen from movement and blocked from thought,
my mind wonders to where you are and alone.
In a dark crevis of black lack of light,
a tempation of nothing more than want and pain.
Your there and i'm here where our mind are separate,
again my mind blows and the tears flow away.
Nothing works cause i'm broken to pieces,
till I'm finally not looking to you.
When the movement returns to my pen,
I stutter from the lack luster cold of the ink.
The blackness is wrong and gone from my thought,
the gray turns to white as my mind slows again.
Author notes
I haven't written anything in awhile. Tell me what you think.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by vampireprincess.
315 points, ended June 25, 2008, 59 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrite conest by serenity silvermoon.
1500 points, ended June 12, 429 entries
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Comments
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This is amazing... I love it. I love this kind of poetry. Thanks for sharing it with me. Good luck in my contest.
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